Treatment #2 – The First 3 Minutes
Title: Class A
Prescription
Duration: 3-4 minutes.
Audience: The ideal
audience we want for this opening film are people who are intrigued in
thrillers, and will get rooted into the plot and questions raised. We’re aiming
for an audience of about 15-25, especially students due to having disposable
income through their parents, and apparent interest into the genre. We also can
look to advertise to Yorkshire people due to how we filmed in Yorkshire and had
Yorkshire actors, however this is the only thing that would exempt them from
other actors and locations, meaning outside of Yorkshire we can’t advertise
this as a USP, and can’t use the filmed in Britain as a USP outside of Britain.
The current lull in major movie pictures that combine sci-fi and thriller, with
many modern thrillers focusing on paranormal thrillers or murder thrillers,
this can open a certain niche in the audience due to wanting more sci-fi
thrillers.
Certificate: 15
Distributor: Universal
Pictures.
Synopsis: The film begins
with the main two characters, Jarrod and Danni, going for a walk together in a
local park, they are dressed in regular clothing that wouldn’t stand out today.
They seem to be having a nice time, until they notice an apparent body, presumably
dead, next to a pond. They rush over to him and urgently try to wake him up,
and after checking if he is breathing and check his pulse. They drag him to the
pond, yelling about having to call 999 and hoping he isn’t dead. They pull him
to the grass from the banking, and Danni begins to do CPR on him. He struggles
to cough up water, once coughing up all of the water he is able to come around,
however he’s still feeling dazed and confused from the whole ordeal. They
decide against calling 999 and they decide to take him back to their house, he
is still dazed when they make this decision and follows along with it. It cuts
to their home, and they take him inside and set him down to warm him up, making
him a mug of coffee and waiting for him to fully come round and wake up. Over
this time, it repeatedly keeps cutting to a black screen while showcasing the
actors in the film, once this sequence is over, it shows the current events.
Danni and Jarrod
introduce themselves calmly to the man, awaiting his response nervously, while
trying to remain calm. They ask if he’s OK and try to make sure he isn’t dazed
or confused anymore. Jarrod questions how he ended up near the pond, but Kian
states he has no memory of yesterday, developing on this by telling them how he
has no memory of anything since yesterday morning, which is show through a
flashback sequence. Kian finishes the coffee and says he’s fine to go home, to
which Jarrod and Danni refuse, insisting he should be driven home. Kian,
refusing the help, says he’ll walk himself home, and his house isn’t very far.
Kian begins walking home, and shows Kian having a migraine, with shaky shots,
close up, and it begins to show him having a vision in a flashback sequence
type shot. He sees Jarrod and Danni getting shot, killing them, by a mugger in
the park that they found Kian. Kian realises he needs to act fast, running back
to the house only to find they’re out already. He follows his instinct and
vision, running to the park where he saw them getting shot.
After getting to the park
he looks around frantically for them, hoping they haven’t been shot yet, and
finds them walking near the pond in which they first found him. He runs over to
them, and they’re worried he’s gotten worse. He quickly explains the problem
and how they’re in danger, with them not believing him due to how he’s not been
well since they saw him. Inevitably, a mugger turns up, he threatens Kian and
insists that Jarrod gives him what he has, confusing Jarrod. Kian then attacks
the mugger and wrestles him to the ground. The mugger shoots Kian, shocking
Jarrod and Dannie, and shocking the mugger when he realises the bullet didn’t
do anything, no mark or pain is left on Kian. The mugger is startled and runs
away, scared at what just happened, dropping his gun as he runs.
Kian picks the gun up,
Jarrod and Danni visibly scared, Danni asks ‘How did you know this will happen?’,
to which Kian has no words.
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